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Old 07-12-2017, 07:16 PM   #1
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Blood of the Demon (inking Practice)

Digital Inking practice I completed using another artists pencils/inks

Original pencils by John Byrne for Blood of the Demon.

I would appreciate any constructive criticism you are willing to offer. I am also interested in collaborating on comic work with other pencilers/inkers.

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Firstly , I am by no means an inker but visually to me- It seems like there should be more line variations. It looks a little muddy. Maybe a little more line weight variation?
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its hard to see when its so small. if you could post bigger scans it helps a lot.

but I would agree that line weight variation could be a focus.

things like hair and the beard are looking like a bunch or wavy lines more than real hair that flows and moves ..etc..

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