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Old 07-16-2018, 11:30 AM   #1
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I've seen this script kickin' around on Penciljack for a while, so I figured I'd take a crack at it. Written by Ben Holman, art and letters by me.



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Old 07-23-2018, 12:33 PM   #2
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Wow!! Powerful story backed by powerful artwork!!
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Pages are good, colors work w your lines. This dialogue is awful and unfortunately your Letters are kinda incompetent. Sorry. Overpowering SFX, tails crossing, balloon covers Two Face's body.

Editors don't need to see Letters unless you're advertising ability to Letter at professional level. There's room to improve.
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