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Old 09-05-2017, 04:36 PM   #1
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Old 09-05-2017, 05:18 PM   #2
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Wow, very good! Very dynamic.
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These are great! Minor issues of framing (3.4 spider-sense squished, 4.6 cropped left foot) but leaving room for dialogue is a good habit and you seem to be doing that. Spot's face also feels weird, like the rendering belies the form of a face and is another complex shape entirely -- is that intended?

Great environments, dynamic figures, clear action. Professional pages! Keep doing them and posting them and you'll get noticed, submit to editors when possible. Do a webcomic, a page/week of whatever story you want -- endless samples would work ie wordless action -- or something that requires lettering and perhaps colors if you want.

Definitely keep going!
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These are great! Minor issues of framing (3.4 spider-sense squished, 4.6 cropped left foot) but leaving room for dialogue is a good habit and you seem to be doing that. Spot's face also feels weird, like the rendering belies the form of a face and is another complex shape entirely -- is that intended?

Great environments, dynamic figures, clear action. Professional pages! Keep doing them and posting them and you'll get noticed, submit to editors when possible. Do a webcomic, a page/week of whatever story you want -- endless samples would work ie wordless action -- or something that requires lettering and perhaps colors if you want.

Definitely keep going!
Thank you for the advice!

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Old 09-06-2017, 12:13 AM   #5
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Wow. I can really believe Spider-Man is on these pages jumping panel to panel.
Great dynamic!
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Old 09-06-2017, 12:17 AM   #6
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Wow, Jethro, I was just checking out some of your other stuff over on your DA page. Gotta say, some of it really blows me away, my friend! I'm cobbling together a review of these sample pages and will post it as soon as I'm not stuck here in Corporate Hell. LOL!
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Old 09-08-2017, 08:20 PM   #7
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Panel 2.1 looks really cool.

It's always damn impressive to see that single-character-multiple-avatars-multiple-actions thing. I can totally buy the smug look on Spot's face.

("The Spot. Dumb name, Disturbing power." - Daredevil)

I agree about the framing thing - that "squished" spider sense is just weird. It also doesn't seem to be absolutely necessary since he's being rescued in the next panel and spidey-sense doesn't really come into play in the action; so you can just get rid of it and the narrative still plays out fine, IMHO.

Overall nice work!
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what else can be said. great work.
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Wow, this stuff IS good, very pro
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