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Old 01-01-2019, 04:37 PM   #1
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Good Land #1 from Death Valley Press



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An adware developer tries to survive life in exile after rising through the ranks of the elite and making enemies with a dark entity.

Meanwhile, the better part of society carries on unconcerned and all-consuming while the media detracts from another conspiracy theory.

Good Land - Issue #1 (32 pages)

Written/Created by Wes Klimers
Illustrated by Glauco Silva
Colored by Shiqi
Lettered by Justin Birch








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Old 01-11-2019, 04:43 PM   #2
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Not really digging the cover. Other than that, this ticks all my boxes. Good stuff.
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Not really digging the cover. Other than that, this ticks all my boxes. Good stuff.
Thanks for the feedback!

Anything specific on what you dislike about the cover?

We do have a variant available.
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The cover is bland compared to the interior content, the premise sounds boring but the interior hooked me in, use that drama on the cover!

If the rest of the book is this fast pace with action plot, it's going to turn some heads!
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The cover is bland compared to the interior content, the premise sounds boring but the interior hooked me in, use that drama on the cover!

If the rest of the book is this fast pace with action plot, it's going to turn some heads!
Makes sense.

I think because I always knew I'd be using this 5 page intro as a hook that I let the cover be what it is.

Thanks!
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Adding video preview and link:



https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xies26nJ6_Y
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Good Land is currently getting a makeover and will be back on IGG within weeks.

Follow @RemorsefulCEO for updates.
  • New colors.
  • New cover.
  • New branding.

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Hmm. I liked it but I agree with the others about the cover. Maybe something so extreme but that's just me. I like the video! Overall it's cool work!
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Hmm. I liked it but I agree with the others about the cover. Maybe something so extreme but that's just me. I like the video! Overall it's cool work!
Thank you for looking!

The first attempt at this campaign was an undersell in every aspect. I was going too hard for the mystery and intrigue without giving something of substance.

The new cover and the whole revamp will do it justice this time.
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