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Old 03-14-2018, 01:09 AM   #61
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oh yes, i realize that, i am still working on it, because i used to always draw manga and these years i've learnt to draw like american comic way, may be that's it, but thanks david, i will learn how to draw nose properly!!

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I'm not sure on the noses and ears in the steam room pages as they seem very pointy.
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Old 03-17-2018, 07:05 AM   #62
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Old 03-17-2018, 07:08 AM   #63
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Eureka Page 2

Here is the page 2 of my 4 pages anthology called Eureka written by Tee.
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Old 03-17-2018, 07:11 AM   #64
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Eureka Page 3

And here the page 3.

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Old 03-17-2018, 07:13 AM   #65
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Eureka The Last Page

The last page,

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Old 03-18-2018, 01:46 PM   #66
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A few points have been made from many here. One of them touching on a couple of issues with your pages you first posted, and that is that all your figures are pretty much the same size. Adding to this, The biggest issues come with your sequential work. Your storytelling from panel to panel is thrown off by you flipping the camera too many times. The characters flip constantly and is confusing to the reader. There are also a few awkward camera angles on some of the panels that can be laid out differently. Most of these are when he's meeting the King.

Some of your proportions were off in those pages but I have noticed improvement on the later posts. I do want to point out that your singular characters are well done. It's only when you do your sequential work that things get confusing and proportions are off.

As for the coloring, it's definitely improving. The biggest thing you have to work on is your lighting. Pick a single light source and work from that.

There's a lot of improvement in your work which is great, so keep up the good work.
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Old 03-18-2018, 08:32 PM   #67
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Thank you so much it helps and i really appreciate it. Yes i will try harder to draw more proper. And for the coloring, yes, that is my issue, i am still on that stage where as long as my eyes enjoying it, i'll just take it, and haven't consider any light source yet, thank you, yes i will learn hard. Thank you so much!

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A few points have been made from many here. One of them touching on a couple of issues with your pages you first posted, and that is that all your figures are pretty much the same size. Adding to this, The biggest issues come with your sequential work. Your storytelling from panel to panel is thrown off by you flipping the camera too many times. The characters flip constantly and is confusing to the reader. There are also a few awkward camera angles on some of the panels that can be laid out differently. Most of these are when he's meeting the King.

Some of your proportions were off in those pages but I have noticed improvement on the later posts. I do want to point out that your singular characters are well done. It's only when you do your sequential work that things get confusing and proportions are off.

As for the coloring, it's definitely improving. The biggest thing you have to work on is your lighting. Pick a single light source and work from that.

There's a lot of improvement in your work which is great, so keep up the good work.
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Old 03-20-2018, 12:57 AM   #68
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Old 03-20-2018, 10:14 PM   #69
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Cover Sketch of We're Dead

It's just story inside my head.

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Nice job on the sequentials. Love the page where the comic character is reading a comic book about himself.
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Old 05-01-2018, 08:30 PM   #72
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We're dead webcomic is here!!

Hi guys, i just want you all know that today my webcomic called WE'RE DEAD is actually launched!! And you can read it online for free herehttp://www.wearedeadcomic.com/p/how-does-it-work.html

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Old 05-02-2018, 08:22 PM   #73
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Wallpaper

Have you read my webcomic called WE'RE DEAD? If you haven't read it yet you can visit http://www.wearedeadcomic.com/p/how-does-it-work.html and read it for free!

And here is the first wallpaper from WE'RE DEAD.


And if you want to watch the time lapse video of the drawing process, you can visit my YouTube channel here https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wZERjzgMfq4&t=7s

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WE'RE DEAD page 1

Have you read my webcomic WE'RE DEAD?
If you haven't please visit http://www.wearedeadcomic.com/p/how-does-it-work.html
And it's also available in webtoon here https://www.webtoons.com/en/challeng...itle_no=175278

Here is the page 1 unlettered:
Hope you like it

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Old 05-09-2018, 12:10 AM   #75
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WE'RE DEAD Page 8

Hi guys, first update is already here, if you haven't read my webcomic WE'RE DEAD please kindly click http://www.wearedeadcomic.com/p/chapter-one.html and hope you like it..

Here is one page from this week update.
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