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James Mulholland
04-04-2014, 08:05 AM
Hey everyone. Here is my new webcomic 'Miracle'. It's only 5 pages, so if you have a couple of minutes, I'd really appreciate if you could give it a read.

http://Shortstories.webcomic.ws/comics/20/

If you like it, then please share it around and follow me @ www.facebook.com/JamesMulhollandPage
or @ https://twitter.com/James_Mul1990

If you have not checked out my other stories, then please do. Feedback is appreciated.

Thanks

Art by Mike Bunt - http://mikebunt.tumblr.com/

Colors by Armand Jasmin - http://isipbatawalangmagawa.deviantart.com/

Bishop
04-04-2014, 09:50 AM
The site is loading VERY slow today for some reason. Each page takes about 3 or 4 minutes to come up.

The last panel on page 3 isn't very clear. After getting to page 4 I saw that it was an explosion, but the small panel with muted tones at the end of page 3 did not really convey that.

Overall, though, still a good solid story. I wish there was more to it, and maybe that is a good thing. I'd just like to learn more about this hero, who he/she is, where they are from, etc.