View Full Version : GONE IS INNOCENCE - Full story (8 pgs) online for free.

James Mulholland
07-14-2014, 06:41 AM
Hey everyone,

- http://shortstories.webcomic.ws/comics/33/

'GONE IS INNOCENCE' - Full story (8 pages), is now online at link below, for free. Please, if people have 5 minutes, give this one a read. I'm very happy with it and I hope it entertains :) Will be out in print (colored) in early 2015 :) Art by Daniel Romero.

Thanks for taking the time to read. Feel free to share and leave feedback. I really hope you all enjoy.


07-14-2014, 08:50 AM
I like this story, but why does it take so long for the pages to load? It takes 2-3 minutes, and the comic pages are only about 719 kb. Granted, for a black and white image like this it should be less that 200 kb (I think). However, 719 kb should be pretty quick on the connection I'm on.

James Mulholland
07-18-2014, 12:56 PM
Hey Bishop,

I'm really sorry to hear that. I made the size as small as I could but you could still read it.

It opens up fast for me (on a 5mb connection). So sorry to hear you've had trouble with the pages opening.

Thanks for sticking with it and finishing the story though. I appreciate it.



07-18-2014, 01:08 PM
Strange. I tried from work using multiple browsers with the same result. We have a dedicated 100mb pipe that bursts to 1gb if the load gets to heavy. Everything else is blazing fast.