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tim1961
07-20-2014, 02:40 PM
http://www.timsnotebook.com/images/comics/ME_1_cover.jpg
http://www.timsnotebook.com/images/comics/ME_1_pg_0.jpg
http://www.timsnotebook.com/images/comics/ME_1_pg_1.jpg

Just finished penciling and lettering the last page of the first issue. I'm raising funds on my Patreon (http://www.patreon.com/mayfield_eight) site. Subscription is $1/month to see the latest pages. Otherwise, just go to my website to see the old stuff for free: http://www.timsnotebook.com/comics_mayfield.html

danos
07-23-2014, 03:30 AM
I wish you would put the first 3-5 pages up at least so others can get a feel for your style. I know they're included in the link but I think it would be easier/faster to raise interest if you had them here also. For the same reason I would suggest a different cover. It felt a bit underwhelming and felt more suitable for the credits interior or back cover. Maybe something with the protagonist figure or faces featured prominently so someone can pick up on your cool style straight from the cover and want to look inside. Other than that I'll be looking forward to this. Definitely the making of a great comics creator. Keep up the great work!