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lazyj57 11-26-2021 06:12 AM

Spider-Man Noir Pinup
 
Hey there. I am struggling a bit with this pinup drawing. The coat and pants are giving me some trouble. I would appreciate some feedback and cc. Thank you.

I am considering adding some screen tones over the gun and a graphic shape for the background, maybe a thick panel.

https://i.imgur.com/pORDgyA.jpg

DCdraw 11-26-2021 10:54 AM

Coat and pants look fine. You could probably black in the interior folds where his shins are and that would still look fine. Also I wonder if maybe you could either black in that part of his torso so that only the buttons show or maybe expand on the part that is showing so that reads like clothing folds more. But other than that looks powerful, keep going.


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