roughs for new superman samples
 

hey everyone. I recently finished the first page for a new set of sample pages, this time I'm doing superman. I roughed out some ideas for pg 2 and 3 and would love to know what you think of the layout. On pg 2 the basic idea is that people notice a girl on the tracks in the subway and superman is trying to hurry there to save her and on pg 3 he stops the train. thanks for looking! I also included a pic of the completed first page so you can see how the story flows.
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