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jakebilbao 12-01-2018 10:19 AM

White Indian sequential pages
Hi guys, hope you enjoy some of the pages I have done for White Indian graphic novel by Sytse Algera.

ld-airgrafix 12-01-2018 07:29 PM


sevans 12-01-2018 08:31 PM

Kind of has a Geof Darrow feel to it.
Love Geof Darrow.

You work it out.

cesare2009 12-05-2018 01:36 AM

love it

12013 12-05-2018 04:52 PM

pretty slick. detailed as hell. almost to much for my personal tastes. I think all the lines depicting the boards/slats in the construction of the building is to harsh on the eyes. like if it were toned down with some of the stuff in the distance, it might be better. maybe. but im no expert. lots of hard work done here and it looks really good.

jakebilbao 12-17-2018 06:13 AM

by the way, below is the exact script for the three pages above.

Page 11
11-1We see both of them riding through the prairie with the occasional mountain, they talk to each other. Ptcilelooks upset.While Jake says something
11-2While they ride Ptcile says something to Jake
11-3We see them riding to the town
11-4In the town we see the saloon and the bankrobbers are playing poker, lots of beer and a few hookers visible as well.
11-5We see the boss with a handful of cards and a stack of money on the table, with three others playing poker.
11-6One of the buys throws his cards on the table and yells to the boss.
11-7The same guy pulls out a gun and wants to shoot the boss while hesays something with an angry facy
11-8We see a close up of the boss his eyes above the cards while he spits something out of his mouth into the face of the guy

Page 12

12-1We see a close up of the guy pulling the trigger
12-2Then the guy is hit by a bulletin the face.
12-3We see the boss and his gun with smoke coming out of the barrel.
12-4The boss takes all the money, the others have their hands raised and yell that it is not fair.
12-5We see from another table the remaining crew walking to that table.
12-6The other players leave the table with the crew looking angry and intimidating to them.
12-7One of the bankrobbers says something to the boss, we see the dead body on the floor with a growing pool of blood
12-8The bartender says something to a little kid age about 8-10 years

Page 13
13-1We see a little kid running out of the saloon and running to the sheriff’s office, while yelling and waving with his arms.
13-2Inside the sheriff’s office, with jail visible we see a young sheriff cleaning his rifle when the boy stumbles inside and says something. Visible are two deputies, big fellows as well
13-3We see the sheriff entering the salon with two deputies, the bank robbers and the crew all standing around the boss
13-4We see the sheriff saying something. In the background if possible we see the kid standing that warned him
13-5The boss stands up and points to his crew while talking to the sherrif
13-6We see that the sheriff reloads his rifle, it’s a bolt action pump gun andhe speaks while doing so.
13-7The Boss stands up and fires three shots, we must see three shots and perhaps even the bullets flying out of the colt pistol

Morganza 12-17-2018 04:39 PM

I love these pages, the art and storytelling are top notch!

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pandayboss 03-14-2020 01:06 PM

Amazing work overall, Jake! :thumbs:

jakebilbao 03-15-2020 01:42 AM


Originally Posted by pandayboss (Post 1883926)
Amazing work overall, Jake! :thumbs:

thanks Dario!


artsnake 03-15-2020 11:25 AM

gorgeous stuff. good acting and lots of detail. :banana:

jakebilbao 03-15-2020 10:58 PM


Originally Posted by artsnake (Post 1883935)
gorgeous stuff. good acting and lots of detail. :banana:

Thank you!


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