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Old 04-23-2015, 02:32 AM   #14
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Ok, cool... it was mainly a temperature check and it sounds like we're on the same page.

I don't like rap music, but I can appreciate effort and talent and I've seen what seems to be popular... so while I might not like it, I can see why some artists are successful at it and others aren't.

I figured asking here would also help Robert out to see where you're coming from... so if you say the story wasn't compelling in some way or "grab your reader by page 3" you aren't crapping on his story so much as saying good storytelling requires hitting certain beats and keeping your reader in mind so that you're telling the story you want in a way that the reader will absorb and enjoy.
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