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Old 07-12-2018, 10:16 AM   #9
Afro
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I really like the art on this one! I'm with bishop if I was drawing this to submit to editors...take the avengers out. You don't want an editor asking any questions or getting taken out of story. If you were just doing it for fun then my bad.
Second page with ultron is my favorite really like the camera angle and use of backgrounds.

The only thing I didn't get is the big hunk of blank space on page 3 by ultron close up. If you are using the space for lettering I would say just expand that panel or if you are going to show people watching the fight from the street. I don't know that blank space throws me off some.

But overall I think you can tell you put a lot of time and work into these pages.
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