Thread: A new page
View Single Post
Old 07-11-2015, 10:29 AM   #2
Rob Norton
apprentice of the pencil
 
Rob Norton's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2002
Location: utah
Posts: 3,990
Rob Norton is a splendid one to beholdRob Norton is a splendid one to beholdRob Norton is a splendid one to beholdRob Norton is a splendid one to beholdRob Norton is a splendid one to beholdRob Norton is a splendid one to beholdRob Norton is a splendid one to beholdRob Norton is a splendid one to beholdRob Norton is a splendid one to beholdRob Norton is a splendid one to beholdRob Norton is a splendid one to behold

it might just be because im tired, but in panel 3, where the guy is walking, I thought that tree in the background was a mushroom cloud, and the text of the story was suggesting he had a vision of nuclear war.

but its just a tree. so..i would suggest referencing a real tree for things like that. rarely are they so straight and rigid with just a perfectly shaped canopy of leaves. a little more attention paid to real details might help.

rob
Rob Norton is offline   Reply With Quote