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it might just be because im tired, but in panel 3, where the guy is walking, I thought that tree in the background was a mushroom cloud, and the text of the story was suggesting he had a vision of nuclear war.
but its just a tree. so..i would suggest referencing a real tree for things like that. rarely are they so straight and rigid with just a perfectly shaped canopy of leaves. a little more attention paid to real details might help.
rob
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