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Old 11-02-2016, 06:48 PM   #5
jorgezeraba
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The first issue I see is I would have drawn the first panel showing space smaller, to leave more room for the interior of the "lunch room." I get the jist of whats going on, a fight in the cafeteria scenario is being shown, but the details of what is happening, is very confusing to me.
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