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Old 07-21-2017, 04:31 AM   #7
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The heads of the characters are too large in a lot of shots. Hal Jordan's head in the first panel looks too big. I know it is closer to the camera than the rest of his body, but it still looks too big.

Jordan's head in the second panel of page 2 looks too big again.

His head in the third panel of page 3 looks too big again. Watch out for those head sizes. Fix your heads and your figures will look quite a bit better, though there are probably some other issues with them. I'd have to take a closer look. The heads are just what immediately popped out to me. Their heads look large and their bodies look squat, which isn't a very aesthetic look to my eyes. I would figure out exactly what mis-configurations are causing that effect and change them.
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