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Old 02-14-2018, 12:07 AM   #43
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I made some revisions to the last page I posted. The main one was some corrections to Expulzar's head in the upper right panel. He's got a strange head, and frankly, I'm not yet used to drawing it from all angles.

I also changed the dialogue slightly, and the position of some word balloons to improve readability.

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