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Old 06-14-2014, 04:38 AM   #2
Alyssa
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LOL It cracks me up that Steven knows I'm reading every TPG. Methinks I'm somewhat predictable.

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Mama (caption)

terrible zombies were chasing Mama and Gramps.

Mama (caption)

They wanted to eat our flesh! (Uh oh. What happened here, Alyssa?)
Dropsies on the quotation marks? Mama's talking, not having an internal monologue, so quotation marks should be there. Sam got it for the rest of the script (unless I missed anything), but missed them here.

That is what you were after, right?


I'd like to drop some more comments, but worked too much today, brain be fried (dunno how you guys do these columns after working all day!). Will jump back here soon if it's okay with Sam!
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