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Old 06-17-2022, 01:43 PM   #73
lysdexic
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There's a lot of good stuff here! I love the character and set design! I'm also fascinated at how you improve the more the story continues. Some critiques I have noted, were addressed in the later pages. Admittedly, I even got into the story as I continued observing the pages. Keep up the improvements and utilizing your references when improving your anatomy and page layouts. If it helps, i recommend looking at books on cinematography and composition. The Famous Artists Courses are an excellent resource and a secret weapon for artists.

https://fdocuments.net/document/the-...03.html?page=1

the link is their course on composition. I feel these tips can vastly improve your panels. Thanks for sharing and keep up the fantastic work!
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