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Old 03-19-2019, 06:37 PM   #11
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Originally Posted by MeltedChi View Post
Very nice MeltedChi .

I like the smoke and butterflies and hair.

Regarding composition, if it is was me I would have drawn her legs all the way down to the bottom of the page. Chopping them off like that suggests to me that she might be standing in water or something like that.

Hope that helps, please ignore if not .
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