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Old 02-13-2021, 11:42 AM   #5
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Awesome looking stuff. very polished style.
One criticism I can not get the choreography of the sword fight. It looks like two guys waving nerf swords in each others general direction. The first panel of the fight both characters are just waving the swords in some random direction neither knowing how to challenge a real opponent. The third panel it looks like the bad guy just slashed across the hero's stomach with no effect. Are they nurf swords? The last two panels again just random waving of the swords with no effect. Again must be nerf swords.
The same with the two panels of sword waving on the proceeding page I can not tell for sure what is going on there and leaves me with an unsatisfying read.
Great looking stuff over all though.
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