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Old 02-01-2015, 01:31 PM   #13
SamRoads
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How do you know a guy is creepy-looking? Just wondering. Is it bad hair? TV generally equates good looks with heroicism and bad looks with villainy. Phrenology is still with us, I suppose.

The wall which over-shadows him. The light source is later stated to be from the window in the distance. For any shadow to be falling on him from the leftmost wall, it would require a light source beyond that wall.

However, I don't know what's weirder. That, or the left wall being 'high'. Maybe this is an odd way of saying 'the ceilings are high'.

But really I'm reaching. I simply don't understand.

Anyway, a grim script lovingly worked over by The Liamey and the King of All Editing. Thanks fellas.
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