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Old 05-18-2014, 12:59 PM   #12
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Incorrect.

You can get away with anything as long as it is done well. Unfortunately, this wasn't.

Now I'm interested in why you chose to start the book this way, with a secondary character and their backstory instead of the primary protagonist/antagonist. It's a unique decision, and I'm interested to know how you arrived at it.
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