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Old 05-18-2014, 01:11 PM   #13
DarkHalf05
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I'd like to take a shot at the moving panel question.

Of course there is the fact she is aiming and shooting at the same time, which should be two separate actions. However, I would assume the artist would show her shooting after she has already taken aim. So the image itself wouldn't likely be a moving panel.

Until you read the dialog. She is telling the hostage not to move. This is an action that would be required before she shoots. So it's almost as if the panel is moving in time backwards.

Also, there is never any sound effects for the gun shot(s).

I hope to see you revisit this script in a future TPG! I'd live to see how it grows.

Ryan
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