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Old 01-03-2019, 12:23 AM   #5
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The second image looks pretty good, although I think I would go with a bit of a smaller font. What size are you using?

Also, putting that balloon that says, "He's more of a father to me than my own," above the text that comes before that part... that's not something I would do, because it can confuse readability, but I guess you can do that. But I wouldn't do something like that unless I absolutely had to. And in the first panel, I don't think I would have the balloons positioned so far away from the speakers. Is there any particular reason why you wanted to have the balloons way up in that ceiling area?

On the third one, I'm personally not a fan of the tails on some of the balloons.
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