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Old 04-25-2015, 01:50 AM   #4
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I wanted contemporary speech patterns juxtaposed with a setting we'd relate to the Golden Age of Piracy (17th and early 18th century) but no, it definitely does not take place on Earth.

I also rewrote that line for better foreshadowing, placed it in a more strategic scene, and then went ahead and completely rewrote this script. I know I still have a lot to learn, but it took somebody slapping my baby for me to realize I was doing us both a giant disservice by writing how I did. I feel better, and it looks worlds better. I think.
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