[T_F_Mann]

I'll take a look, but reminds you how? In a good way or a bad way?

In a good way. There's a short intro with two demons discussing her and then a two page spread of her being thrown off a building while firing her gun back at the guys who just threw her off. Combine that with a few captions to add characterization. It works well.

P.S: Yes, I was actually thinking of putting the revised draft up (soon as it's done). Any forum rule about if it should be done in the same thread or start a new one?

I don't know of any rules one way or another. If it were me as long as this thread is still here I'd do it on this one. I'd think it'd make it easier to compare and contrast the two.