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Old 11-03-2015, 06:39 PM   #6
Flightyfelon
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Yeah my penciling style is very light. I do want to make everything clear right from the start, however, and I thank you both for your critiques!

The reason I went with this arrangement of panels is because I wanted to invoke some symmetry. That's also why the lines from the tower on the second page merge into the bandages of the falling skeleton.
I do agree that I probably should have gone with another approach though hehe.
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