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TPG Week 164: You Need To Add Story To


Hello, one and all, and welcome back to The Proving Grounds! This week, we have a new Brave One in Calvin Gimpelevich. Also, while I know you're looking forward to having Steve Colle in blue, this week it's just me. Steve should be back on his next rotation. So sit back, relax, and let's see what Calvin brings us in



[Wolfmen]



Just a small aside: this is issue 2, just in case anyone is extra lost.

PAGE 1

Three small panels across the top. Panel 4 is thick and takes up the whole horizontal page.

PANEL 1

Small panel. Close up of a heavy box being dropped on the asphalt. (What kind of box? Wooden or cardboard?)

SFX

THUD

PANEL 2

Large hairy man-arms lifting another box.(Lifting it from where? If we can see the arms, we can see something of the surroundings.)

NO DIALOGUE

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