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Old 02-21-2014, 08:22 PM   #1
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TPG Week 165: The Story Must Make Sense


Welcome back to The Proving Grounds! This week, we have a new Brave One in Tommy Sigalov. Tommy, it seems, has some lessons to learn. We've got Samantha LeBas looking svelte in purple, I'm doling out haymakers in red, and we'll see just what happens when Tommy gets



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Just a quick note: This was sent over in a 9 pitch. Like what's been happening recently, I upped it to 12. You should all feel sorry for Sam.



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FIVE PANELS



1.1

Small panel of ISHIKAWA’s hand turning a Dictaphone on.(Oh good, 9 point font, a script for ants.) (Take a look at the panel numbering. To suss it out really quickly, it takes out the guesswork as to what page this panel belongs on. It goes page number.panel number. This is neither right nor wrong. It's easy enough to understand what's going on, and it saves some keystrokes. Tommy just has to make sure he knows where he's at at all times. This is fine as long as he's consistent.)


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Old 02-27-2014, 09:47 AM   #2
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Thanks Sam and Steve. Another good piece.

I actually look forward to scripts that engage Steve's story-mode.

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Thanks, Sam.

And, you could be a masochist. Just putting that out there...
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