My Last Work

[Cloves Rodrigues]

Cosmic Warrior 3

i hope you like

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Thanks a lot !

Comment please !

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[Cloves Rodrigues]

[Cloves Rodrigues]

[artofrene]

These look great!

[artsnake]

Awesome looking stuff. very polished style.
One criticism I can not get the choreography of the sword fight. It looks like two guys waving nerf swords in each others general direction. The first panel of the fight both characters are just waving the swords in some random direction neither knowing how to challenge a real opponent. The third panel it looks like the bad guy just slashed across the hero's stomach with no effect. Are they nurf swords? The last two panels again just random waving of the swords with no effect. Again must be nerf swords.
The same with the two panels of sword waving on the proceeding page I can not tell for sure what is going on there and leaves me with an unsatisfying read.
Great looking stuff over all though.

[Kajinink79]

.... you’ve got a lot of great facial expressions Keeps the “story” moving along as well as the action.... there are tons of mistakes but the progress is typical and the direction is great (just sayin’ it’s not flat out perfect, but you’re perfecting it.” Some of the figures seem awkward due to positioning or because of the background which is lacking like the buildings It’s like seeing an old man w/ n old tech phone. He’s old wrinkly and detailed yet he’s on some Atari type world.... The hero of the story is drawn really well. I’d give A+ for achievement

[Cloves Rodrigues]

Originally Posted by artsnake

Awesome looking stuff. very polished style.
One criticism I can not get the choreography of the sword fight. It looks like two guys waving nerf swords in each others general direction. The first panel of the fight both characters are just waving the swords in some random direction neither knowing how to challenge a real opponent. The third panel it looks like the bad guy just slashed across the hero's stomach with no effect. Are they nurf swords? The last two panels again just random waving of the swords with no effect. Again must be nerf swords.
The same with the two panels of sword waving on the proceeding page I can not tell for sure what is going on there and leaves me with an unsatisfying read.
Great looking stuff over all though.

Thanks for your Feedback Artsnake, this will help me in the future

[Cloves Rodrigues]

Originally Posted by Kajinink79

.... you’ve got a lot of great facial expressions Keeps the “story” moving along as well as the action.... there are tons of mistakes but the progress is typical and the direction is great (just sayin’ it’s not flat out perfect, but you’re perfecting it.” Some of the figures seem awkward due to positioning or because of the background which is lacking like the buildings It’s like seeing an old man w/ n old tech phone. He’s old wrinkly and detailed yet he’s on some Atari type world.... The hero of the story is drawn really well. I’d give A+ for achievement

thanks for your feedback, Kajinink79, it helped me a lot