Looking for critiques of my portfolio

Nicochorizo · 10-19-2021, 07:37 PM

Hello everyone! My name is Nico and I'm a chilean artist trying to get my first job in comics. I've assembled a portfolio: 3 pages of Avengers, 4 pages of Spider-man and 2 illustrations.

I'd appreciate any critique you could give me, both regarding the pages and the portofolio in general (Is it enough material? Shoud I add more? Should I remove something?).

Thanks in advance!

Avengers samples:

Spider-man samples:

Illustrations:

**pandayboss** · 10-20-2021, 10:56 AM

Awesome art and pages! I think you already know your basic sequential. The flow of movement is good and well done, I can easily follow the scenes on the page. Your backgrounds are enough to establish the settings and your characters are mainstream of today's style. You did an amazing job!

I thought it's funny with the HULK, he turned because of his cell phone. Haha.

Send those in to publishers, right away!

Nicochorizo · 10-20-2021, 12:43 PM

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Originally Posted by pandayboss

Awesome art and pages! I think you already know your basic sequential. The flow of movement is good and well done, I can easily follow the scenes on the page. Your backgrounds are enough to establish the settings and your characters are mainstream of today's style. You did an amazing job!

I thought it's funny with the HULK, he turned because of his cell phone. Haha.

Send those in to publishers, right away!

Thank you so much! You've given me a lot of confidence and motivation!

And yeah, I also thought it was a bit silly for Banner to lose his cool over a phone hahaha

steveo · 11-20-2021, 09:48 PM

Nice style. As Dario said, get those samples out there. I'd love to work with you but funds are super tight.

SteveO

jedvin · 11-29-2021, 02:06 AM

Great artwork! This is freaking awesome. Do have this colored? If not may color those samples pages of yours - for free. Here is a link to my color staff https://sta.sh/227nd57jgux5?edit=1 and you can reach me at edwin.outcast at gmail dot com.

thank you for sharing!

Randy Stone · 12-02-2021, 02:30 AM

Exceptional pages here, especially the Spidey scene. Love it!

I think you've done a good job of showing that you can handle real world stuff, not just action/pinups.

10-19-2021, 07:37 PM	#1
Nicochorizo Registered User Join Date: Apr 2018 Location: Chile Posts: 5	Looking for critiques of my portfolio Hello everyone! My name is Nico and I'm a chilean artist trying to get my first job in comics. I've assembled a portfolio: 3 pages of Avengers, 4 pages of Spider-man and 2 illustrations. I'd appreciate any critique you could give me, both regarding the pages and the portofolio in general (Is it enough material? Shoud I add more? Should I remove something?). Thanks in advance! Avengers samples: Spider-man samples: Illustrations:

10-20-2021, 10:56 AM	#2
pandayboss Illustrious Chap Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Alberta, Canada Posts: 3,730	Awesome art and pages! I think you already know your basic sequential. The flow of movement is good and well done, I can easily follow the scenes on the page. Your backgrounds are enough to establish the settings and your characters are mainstream of today's style. You did an amazing job! I thought it's funny with the HULK, he turned because of his cell phone. Haha. Send those in to publishers, right away! __________________ Dario Carrasco Jr. Website: Panday Studio. Also check my recent works at DeviantArt Joe Doogan BLOG

11-20-2021, 09:48 PM	#4
steveo There's no stopping it! Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: NJ Posts: 1,689	Nice style. As Dario said, get those samples out there. I'd love to work with you but funds are super tight. SteveO __________________ Writer The Unforgiving Dark 48 BloodRayne: Skies Afire BloodRayne: Dark Soul BloodRayne: Twin Blades

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11-29-2021, 02:06 AM	#5
jedvin Registered User Join Date: May 2013 Location: #580 Pangulang st. Bagumbayan, Bulakan, Bulacan, Philippines Posts: 8	Great artwork! This is freaking awesome. Do have this colored? If not may color those samples pages of yours - for free. Here is a link to my color staff https://sta.sh/227nd57jgux5?edit=1 and you can reach me at edwin.outcast at gmail dot com. thank you for sharing!

12-02-2021, 02:30 AM	#6
Randy Stone Registered User Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: west canadia Posts: 11	Exceptional pages here, especially the Spidey scene. Love it! I think you've done a good job of showing that you can handle real world stuff, not just action/pinups.