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Old 10-07-2012, 05:56 PM   #1
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Exclamation Silica Issue: One

I have been super iffy on putting this up here but I'm giving it a shot.

https://docs.google.com/open?id=0B8I...lpPZnY5TGpGS3M
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Old 10-07-2012, 08:23 PM   #2
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Why super iffy? Are you worried about something?

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Old 10-09-2012, 05:08 AM   #3
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Yes Steve, i'm worried that random comics will pop up with similarities.
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Old 10-09-2012, 05:51 AM   #4
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Yes Steve, i'm worried that random comics will pop up with similarities.
Welcome to the world of storytelling. Everyone borrows from everyone.


If the core concept of your story is so unique and fresh that it would really turn heads, then maybe someone might contemplate nicking it. Is it?


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Old 10-19-2012, 06:48 PM   #5
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The glaring problem with your script is you don't start each page with panel 1. Instead you just keep numbering from panel 1 on the first page to panel one hundered and something on the last.

Fix it.
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Old 10-20-2012, 02:42 PM   #6
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I wouldn't worry about someone stealing your idea. There are no unique ideas, and the amount of time it takes to write a good story renders the act nearly pointless.

The art is in the arrangement. In other words, make it as good as you can and let others care if it's similar or not. You just do your thing.

I'm going to go over this and get it back to you with some notes.
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