Wonder Woman cover WIP

MikeO424 · 03-25-2016, 05:18 PM

Hey everyone. I'm going to be working on some Wonder Woman pages and I'm working on the cover over the next few days. In the script Wonder Woman fights Superman and Supergirl. Here's a thumbnail I came up with. I appreciate any feedback you guys can give me to help make the cover the best it can be. Thanks for looking! -Mike

Lightdragon · 03-26-2016, 02:41 AM

this is my opinion. so I could be wrong or maybe someone else here will correct me. or add to it.

the layout is mediocre. it tells a story of WW about to fight SM and SG. SG's pose is good but not for this scene. that pose would be good if she were shown by herself.

the angle of WW's face is boring.

keep at it. good try .

Artloader · 03-26-2016, 06:22 PM

I like this composition Mike. The way the eye is drawn in a curve from WW to SG to SM feels nice. My only comment is that WW seems to be looking at SM which jars against the flow I've just described. Maybe have WW looking at SG instead?

Good luck with it all though mate

. Looking forward to seeing what you produce.

Morganza · 03-27-2016, 03:04 PM

I've seen this same layout a hundred times, how about a scene where they are physically fighting, I have no idea if that's what is about to happen. The best idea I can give is to chose a moment from the comic this represents and highlight it in a dynamic way, I'm not sure how keen DC is with artistic freedom on covers though, you may have your hands tied.

03-25-2016, 05:18 PM	#1
MikeO424 Registered User Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 20	Wonder Woman cover WIP Hey everyone. I'm going to be working on some Wonder Woman pages and I'm working on the cover over the next few days. In the script Wonder Woman fights Superman and Supergirl. Here's a thumbnail I came up with. I appreciate any feedback you guys can give me to help make the cover the best it can be. Thanks for looking! -Mike

03-26-2016, 02:41 AM	#2
Lightdragon Registered User Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: NYC,USA Posts: 247	this is my opinion. so I could be wrong or maybe someone else here will correct me. or add to it. the layout is mediocre. it tells a story of WW about to fight SM and SG. SG's pose is good but not for this scene. that pose would be good if she were shown by herself. the angle of WW's face is boring. keep at it. good try . __________________ "keep away from people who try to belittle your ambitions.Small people always do that,but the really great make you feel that you too can become great"-Mark Twain Do Not Meddle in the Affairs of dragons for you are crunchy and good with ketchup.

03-26-2016, 06:22 PM	#3
Artloader Registered User Join Date: Jul 2015 Location: England Posts: 422	I like this composition Mike. The way the eye is drawn in a curve from WW to SG to SM feels nice. My only comment is that WW seems to be looking at SM which jars against the flow I've just described. Maybe have WW looking at SG instead? Good luck with it all though mate . Looking forward to seeing what you produce. __________________ “Today, give a stranger one of your smiles. It might be the only sunshine he sees all day.” -- H. Jackson Brown Jr.

03-27-2016, 03:04 PM	#4
Morganza Black Pyramid Studios Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: East Coast, USA Posts: 1,549	I've seen this same layout a hundred times, how about a scene where they are physically fighting, I have no idea if that's what is about to happen. The best idea I can give is to chose a moment from the comic this represents and highlight it in a dynamic way, I'm not sure how keen DC is with artistic freedom on covers though, you may have your hands tied. __________________ Creator of Wicked Jack https://wickedjackmovie.blogspot.com https://www.facebook.com/groups/wickedjack/

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