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[creativejoe83]

Hello again fellow comic book people

Here is another page from the comic book "Extrasensory:The Webcomic" I'm doing the art for.

Thanks for taking a look, and I look forward to hearing opinions and critiques

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[Rob Norton]

it might just be because im tired, but in panel 3, where the guy is walking, I thought that tree in the background was a mushroom cloud, and the text of the story was suggesting he had a vision of nuclear war.

but its just a tree. so..i would suggest referencing a real tree for things like that. rarely are they so straight and rigid with just a perfectly shaped canopy of leaves. a little more attention paid to real details might help.

rob

[creativejoe83]

Hi Rob,

No excuses here. In my next page I really tried to make the trees more realistic, as opposed to what another critique on Penciljack referred to as "cotton ball trees". They look a bit too fluffy for trees, lol. But, looking at the panel now, I can see what you mean, and its not sleep deprivation on your end, it does look like a mushroom cloud(I'll have to remember that if I do a comic book on war, lol).
Thank you so much for your input, and pointing that out. I'll continue working on my trees for sure