Ensmile series webtoon

andrew-henry · 01-19-2021, 04:20 PM

my & my wife are so honored to be sharing with you our project on webtoon..so feel free to check it and tell us what you think..

https://www.webtoons.com/en/challeng...itle_no=567708

Kajinink79 · 02-14-2021, 04:10 AM

Striking colors

Steve Colle · 02-22-2021, 02:22 AM

Cool work, but you seriously need a different "Grammar Checker". Even without being a 30+ year veteran comic editor, I saw issues in almost every single balloon in the "LOVE BALLAD" chapter. I'd be happy to walk you through what I found to help you notice the issues yourselves.

PM me and I'll give you my email. I'm an editor who also teaches other comic editors and editing, as well as providing instruction and consultation to creators and publishers.

As an aside, I run the Comic Book Editors Alliance Facebook group where you can learn about editing for comics, ask questions of our editor members - many of whom are veterans of Marvel, DC, Dark Horse, and other major publishers - and you can even post looking for an editor. You can find the group at https://www.facebook.com/groups/173822443565186.

01-19-2021, 04:20 PM	#1
andrew-henry Registered User Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 67	Ensmile series webtoon my & my wife are so honored to be sharing with you our project on webtoon..so feel free to check it and tell us what you think.. https://www.webtoons.com/en/challeng...itle_no=567708

02-14-2021, 04:10 AM	#2
Kajinink79 Registered User Join Date: Apr 2018 Location: Ca Posts: 65	Striking colors __________________ Showcased art & writing: Http://kajinink.deviantart.com

02-22-2021, 02:22 AM	#3
Steve Colle Freelance Editor Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Calgary, Alberta, Canada Posts: 1,509	Cool work, but you seriously need a different "Grammar Checker". Even without being a 30+ year veteran comic editor, I saw issues in almost every single balloon in the "LOVE BALLAD" chapter. I'd be happy to walk you through what I found to help you notice the issues yourselves. PM me and I'll give you my email. I'm an editor who also teaches other comic editors and editing, as well as providing instruction and consultation to creators and publishers. As an aside, I run the Comic Book Editors Alliance Facebook group where you can learn about editing for comics, ask questions of our editor members - many of whom are veterans of Marvel, DC, Dark Horse, and other major publishers - and you can even post looking for an editor. You can find the group at https://www.facebook.com/groups/173822443565186. __________________ Every good story must accomplish two goals: Convey information effectively and incite an emotional response. If one or both of these are lacking, the story won't keep the attention of your audience.

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