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Old 10-08-2019, 02:24 PM   #1
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Lightbulb Aynbath - Masarru

Heyo guys,
I finally managed to finish the first chapter of my first webcomic ever (;

If you like surreal obscure dark fantasy comics please let me know what you think of it. Any feedback on the format, presentation etc?



I've created this overview website just for the comic so you can access everything related
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I like the art. I admire that you're creating in the vertical format. I tried that and found out it was not my cup of tea.

The lettering is easy to read on desktop, but I also looked at it on the Webtoon app on my iPhone 7. Tougher to read.

Overall, I think it looks very good. I look forward to seeing more chapters.
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Magnificent work! Art and words are very enchanting and how you put them together are really absorbing. I love the character. Wow!
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I like the art. I admire that you're creating in the vertical format. I tried that and found out it was not my cup of tea.

The lettering is easy to read on desktop, but I also looked at it on the Webtoon app on my iPhone 7. Tougher to read.

Overall, I think it looks very good. I look forward to seeing more chapters.
About the vertical format: Well it is also a question of training. I still did not use it as much as it is possible..

The size of the font was a real struggle for me!! I really couldn't find out how big it should be. I just was aware that if I make it too big it is super annoying for people on desktop.

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Magnificent work! Art and words are very enchanting and how you put them together are really absorbing. I love the character. Wow!
Thanks a lot, so glad to read that!
May I copy paste your opinion onto the blog as a comment pandayboss?


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On another note, I did an alternate version of the protagonist as a poster illu:




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Thanks a lot, so glad to read that!
May I copy paste your opinion onto the blog as a comment pandayboss?
Sure. Thanks as well.
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