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Old 07-26-2016, 11:14 PM   #1
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Thumbs up New Green Lantern Samples!

Hey all here is my first real set of samples I produced! I work as a penciler, and I'm trying for my big push towards penciling for DC Comics! Please tell me what you think, where I can improve, and what you enjoy! These are from Geoff Johns' Green Lantern: Rebirth.







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Old 07-27-2016, 12:44 AM   #2
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Some of the proportions are very 'short'.
The people look small, NOT the usual marvel/DC type proportions.
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Old 07-27-2016, 09:49 AM   #3
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I like your storytelling for sure. I am not familiar with the script, but It looks like a lot of stuff happening in one page. Mainly the guy(Hal Jordan I'm guessing) going through the plane? It was a little confusing to me. But seeing the alien give him the ring and then the close up of him passing, that's my favorite page. It kinda has this art adams vibe to it. Good luck with your submission
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dude ur artworks made me insane.
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Very good. Narrative good. Details and SFX good.
However, the characters heads are too big compared with the body, it make them look short.
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I think your artwork is amazing. I would agree that the characters look short, but that is a minuscule issue that can easily be fixed. I really enjoy your panel layouts. I think you definitely can make it happen man.
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