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Old 05-12-2015, 06:10 PM   #1
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an old short comic about a dream i had last summer. The goat want me to find some numbers under the table..it's an old work but i had some fun doing it and it was my first attempt to digital coloring
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ahah it doesn't have sense at all
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You Italians with your sense of design, I swear :-)

Sorry to stereotype, but it seems to be true... Really like the goat eye/ human eye split panel.
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ehehe Don't worry about the stereotype but i don't understand, What is said about italians and design?
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No idea what he's talking about re: Italians and design.

Also not entirely clear on what's happening in these pages; fun drawing but I can't figure it out. I also don't know enough about your story to know if that's a problem, are these the first pages or do they fall in the middle of a story? Where is this going, can you explain some of your choices?

Overall a little crude, these pages feel at times like you're avoiding drawing things in favor of stylizing the moment; again I may be off-base there but it's just a feeling. Tell me.

Thanks for sharing, post more!

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Old 05-13-2015, 03:23 PM   #8
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that's just a two pages comic i did one year ago about a dream,it doesn't have any sense and i did it in half day..i should repost it in english so maybe it'll be more clear, i'll do it when i found some time
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