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Old 04-24-2015, 08:13 PM   #1
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hy everyone, this is my sketch work, what you think
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if you need penciler you can try me please
contact me Eroel Mj


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Old 04-24-2015, 09:22 PM   #2
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Nice. Textures get crazy in the debris at lower left and across the trunks, cape. Nice intensity, expression; anatomy is a little wonky, muscles floating. If you zoom in on any one section of rendering, it's sometimes tough to know what we're seeing. Encapsulate more, draw less.

Do you ink yourself? This would be hard to ink for someone who can't read your mind; a lot of tonal strokes, a lot of interpretive shapes here. Be more specific with your debris and selective textures, reference everything. Inking this well would require a lot of editing on the park of the finisher, or a lot of luck.

Again this is good, a little more focus on shapes and energy; Toth, JPLeon, Mazzucchelli.

Post more when you can. Keep going!

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Old 04-24-2015, 10:21 PM   #3
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Thanks Mat!
well, I was too lazy when it gave the ink after the pencil is finished LOL, I prefer to give ink on the pencil during rough sketch, because it is more flexible, in my opinion.
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Old 04-27-2015, 11:10 AM   #4
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looks powerful and badass and nice details. unfortunately, the lighting is inconsistent. some of your forms have 3 light sources going on (his right pec actually has 4..!) and even though he has 2 strong light sources close by at each side, the whole figure still looks like your most prominent light source is coming from above.
plan these things out better and use reference when you can..
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