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Old 07-26-2015, 02:24 AM   #1
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Talking New pages :)

Some new pages from the webcomic I'm doing the pencils and inks for, "Extrasensory". The writing and lettering is done by the guy who hired me, Mr. Justin Kyle.

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Old 07-26-2015, 12:10 PM   #2
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Not bad.

I would like for you to think about this.

Try to be more creative with your panels and angles. If you have a section in your story that isn't visually pleasing (IE. story telling/talking heads). Think of interesting ways to draw that panel, or simple change up the shapes of your panels.
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Justin is a poor writer but I like the things going on in your work, very singular POV. The drawing could be better, I think you've got a long way but work hard at it. You've got an idea, that's more than most.

Keep going.

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I appreciate that Matt. This is Justin's first script, and my first sequential art job, so I think we both have some work ahead of us
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