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jimlai · 02-04-2014, 12:07 PM

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Wheeljack · 04-06-2014, 09:50 PM

This stuff is fantastic man!

johnjohn · 04-06-2014, 11:46 PM

Would really like to see a cleaned and inked version of #94

jimlai · 04-26-2014, 01:17 PM

Sequential Story Samples@_@

Metalni · 04-26-2014, 02:08 PM

Fantastic artwork!
But, on the page 1, frame 4, that left hand seems to me a little strange, isn't?

jeffo46 · 04-30-2014, 08:13 AM

I can't make no sense of these sequentials at all Jim. You definitely need to work on your storytelling abilities. It is nice though to finally see you posting pages like these though instead of the same old stuff.

Drakelb · 04-30-2014, 09:33 AM

These are all fantastic! Will you be putting up more Sequential work?

Audio Henchmen · 05-01-2014, 08:59 AM

Good stuff over-all, but I do have a few things to point out.
Picture 1- Horns are too small compared with the rest of body. Lower Jaw is set at a weird angle that doesn't flow well with the rest of the face, the hand in the foreground looks like it only has four fingers, and the shoulder doesn't look right if the shoulder pads were removed, it's floating away from the rest of the body.
Picture 2- Front leg of the horse/Donkey is incorrect (a horse's leg would not bend that way.) The ears are too long. The jaw line on the animal is goofy. The perspective from front to back on the horse is wrong.
Picture 3- The head is set too far back on the body. The ears are not proportionate to the rest of his face. His eyes need to be set further into the skull to add depth. Again watch your anatomy on the shoulders when drawing shoulder pads...if the pads were removed his arms would be hanging way too low.
I hope that some of this helps. I know it sounds like I'm nit-picking, but it's the small details that make the picture.

jimlai · 05-03-2014, 11:21 AM

Scribbly · 05-03-2014, 11:56 AM

Very amazing figure drawing in these pages.

The only thing is that panel 3 page 1 should be flipped horizontally.
For two reasons: first, Composition balance and second, the fact that in panels 1 and 3 the villain's right arm is in Thor's chest not the left arm.

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Wheeljack Registered User Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Chicago, IL Posts: 178	This stuff is fantastic man! __________________ CODENAME: IRON COBRA

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Drakelb Registered User Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: NYC Posts: 268	These are all fantastic! Will you be putting up more Sequential work? Last edited by Drakelb; 04-30-2014 at 09:34 AM. Reason: grammar error

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jimlai Registered User Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 703	Sequential Story Samples@_@

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Metalni wise man said... Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Croatia Posts: 840	Fantastic artwork! But, on the page 1, frame 4, that left hand seems to me a little strange, isn't?

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jeffo46 BANNED Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 1,807	I can't make no sense of these sequentials at all Jim. You definitely need to work on your storytelling abilities. It is nice though to finally see you posting pages like these though instead of the same old stuff.

05-01-2014, 08:59 AM	#103
Audio Henchmen Registered User Join Date: Apr 2014 Posts: 30	Good stuff over-all, but I do have a few things to point out. Picture 1- Horns are too small compared with the rest of body. Lower Jaw is set at a weird angle that doesn't flow well with the rest of the face, the hand in the foreground looks like it only has four fingers, and the shoulder doesn't look right if the shoulder pads were removed, it's floating away from the rest of the body. Picture 2- Front leg of the horse/Donkey is incorrect (a horse's leg would not bend that way.) The ears are too long. The jaw line on the animal is goofy. The perspective from front to back on the horse is wrong. Picture 3- The head is set too far back on the body. The ears are not proportionate to the rest of his face. His eyes need to be set further into the skull to add depth. Again watch your anatomy on the shoulders when drawing shoulder pads...if the pads were removed his arms would be hanging way too low. I hope that some of this helps. I know it sounds like I'm nit-picking, but it's the small details that make the picture.

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05-03-2014, 11:56 AM	#105
Scribbly Registered User Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Wicked Salem, MA Posts: 4,989	Very amazing figure drawing in these pages. The only thing is that panel 3 page 1 should be flipped horizontally. For two reasons: first, Composition balance and second, the fact that in panels 1 and 3 the villain's right arm is in Thor's chest not the left arm.