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Old 03-28-2016, 03:18 PM   #1
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Hello guys. This is my take on Musashi. One of the greatest swordsman in Japan back then. All critiques are welcome.
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Old 03-28-2016, 06:20 PM   #2
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Nice work DavidNH. I like the composition with the Japanese writing, blood and water. The character looks well referenced as well - nice job.

One thing I'm not sure about is the extra staining - I think this detracts from the piece but that may just be me.
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Love it! I agree, though, that some of the cool effects to make look stained detract from the work you put into the line art.
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Old 03-29-2016, 10:00 AM   #4
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Yea maybe I should not put that stain there. Especially that curve around his body. The art is lose its focus because of the stained paper. Thanks.
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