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Old 03-25-2016, 05:18 PM   #1
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Wonder Woman cover WIP

Hey everyone. I'm going to be working on some Wonder Woman pages and I'm working on the cover over the next few days. In the script Wonder Woman fights Superman and Supergirl. Here's a thumbnail I came up with. I appreciate any feedback you guys can give me to help make the cover the best it can be. Thanks for looking! -Mike
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Old 03-26-2016, 02:41 AM   #2
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this is my opinion. so I could be wrong or maybe someone else here will correct me. or add to it.

the layout is mediocre. it tells a story of WW about to fight SM and SG. SG's pose is good but not for this scene. that pose would be good if she were shown by herself.

the angle of WW's face is boring.

keep at it. good try .
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Old 03-26-2016, 06:22 PM   #3
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I like this composition Mike. The way the eye is drawn in a curve from WW to SG to SM feels nice. My only comment is that WW seems to be looking at SM which jars against the flow I've just described. Maybe have WW looking at SG instead?

Good luck with it all though mate . Looking forward to seeing what you produce.
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Old 03-27-2016, 03:04 PM   #4
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I've seen this same layout a hundred times, how about a scene where they are physically fighting, I have no idea if that's what is about to happen. The best idea I can give is to chose a moment from the comic this represents and highlight it in a dynamic way, I'm not sure how keen DC is with artistic freedom on covers though, you may have your hands tied.
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