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Old 05-01-2016, 07:52 AM   #1
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Five page Batman story for the DC Talent Workshop! Any feedback would be greatly appreciated!









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Old 05-01-2016, 12:39 PM   #2
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Well done! This really deserves a full critique but I don't have the time right now.
I'll say that this seems like you definitely put a lot of work into it and it shows. Some panels looks fantastic (cool action, facial close-ups) and some panels less so (some of the perspective and objects). So, I guess consistency would be something to work on. But I can tell that you've got a good thing going, so keep making more pages and they're going to get even better!
Also, this should probably be posted in the Sequential Art Showcase.

PS- I like the lettering, too!
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Old 05-01-2016, 05:07 PM   #3
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Thanks a million for that feedback Saul. Anything I can learn from and take on board, I will do so. Looking back over them, the comment about perspective consistency really makes sense!

I will keep drawing pages and hopefully keep on improving. I will post the progress on the forums. Thanks again for taking the time to comment!
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