Captain America vs. M.O.D.O.K. Inks

JOinks · 10-08-2014, 07:25 PM

Been a while. Figured I'd start posting some stuff and see what I can improve on. This one is by Marcio Abreu.

Inks:

Pencils:

Charles · 10-10-2014, 01:11 AM

Gorgeous!

Kevinlearn · 10-10-2014, 09:36 AM

Nice Job!

JOinks · 10-10-2014, 11:00 AM

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Originally Posted by Charles

Gorgeous!

Thanks!

JOinks · 10-10-2014, 11:01 AM

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Originally Posted by Kevinlearn

Nice Job!

Thank you!

gizroc2 · 10-19-2014, 12:47 PM

It was in the pencils, as well, so it's hard to fault you. But I think it's a little TOO detailed in some areas, like Modok's face and his chair. There's a good chance that some of the parallel lines there will fill in when printed, or even when viewed online. My opinion, from sad experience.

It might have been nice to add a little more thick'n'thin to contour lines, as well.

No doubt you are very skilled; it's just a matter of choices. IMO...

JOinks · 10-25-2014, 10:11 AM

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Originally Posted by gizroc2

It was in the pencils, as well, so it's hard to fault you. But I think it's a little TOO detailed in some areas, like Modok's face and his chair. There's a good chance that some of the parallel lines there will fill in when printed, or even when viewed online. My opinion, from sad experience.

It might have been nice to add a little more thick'n'thin to contour lines, as well.

No doubt you are very skilled; it's just a matter of choices. IMO...

No worries mate I get what your saying. Thanks for the feedback!

VANDAL · 11-04-2014, 01:37 PM

Actually in the pencils Modok looks fine. It's Cap's face that looks all wrong. I love Abreu's work but as an inker when I see Cap's face in this one, he looks like a black man. You followed the lines but I personally would have made Cap's face much more simple. As it stands both in pencils and inks it is WAY over rendered.

Duane Korslund · 11-04-2014, 01:41 PM

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Originally Posted by VANDAL

Actually in the pencils Modok looks fine. It's Cap's face that looks all wrong. I love Abreu's work but as an inker when I see Cap's face in this one, he looks like a black man. You followed the lines but I personally would have made Cap's face much more simple. As it stands both in pencils and inks it is WAY over rendered.

I agree...a little much on Caps face.

JOinks · 11-08-2014, 01:37 PM

Thanks, I'll keep that in mind next time!

10-08-2014, 07:25 PM	#1
JOinks Inker Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Atlanta Posts: 92	Captain America vs. M.O.D.O.K. Inks Been a while. Figured I'd start posting some stuff and see what I can improve on. This one is by Marcio Abreu. Inks: Pencils:

10-10-2014, 01:11 AM	#2
Charles New Hero Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 752	Gorgeous! __________________ Ye Olde Comic Book Temple

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Kevinlearn Kevin Learn Join Date: May 2014 Location: New York Posts: 92	Nice Job! __________________ http://Saccographicnovel.com/

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10-19-2014, 12:47 PM	#6
gizroc2 Registered User Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 17	It was in the pencils, as well, so it's hard to fault you. But I think it's a little TOO detailed in some areas, like Modok's face and his chair. There's a good chance that some of the parallel lines there will fill in when printed, or even when viewed online. My opinion, from sad experience. It might have been nice to add a little more thick'n'thin to contour lines, as well. No doubt you are very skilled; it's just a matter of choices. IMO...

11-04-2014, 01:37 PM	#8
VANDAL VANDAL Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Austin, Texas Posts: 1,362	Actually in the pencils Modok looks fine. It's Cap's face that looks all wrong. I love Abreu's work but as an inker when I see Cap's face in this one, he looks like a black man. You followed the lines but I personally would have made Cap's face much more simple. As it stands both in pencils and inks it is WAY over rendered.

11-08-2014, 01:37 PM	#10
JOinks Inker Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Atlanta Posts: 92	Thanks, I'll keep that in mind next time!