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Old 01-27-2018, 09:37 PM   #16
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and these pages are done. Just gotta letterer them! Woot!!

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Old 01-28-2018, 05:47 PM   #17
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Wow! Looks good PB!!
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The style is great, and you put Herbie in it, i gotta see this when its done.
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Old 01-30-2018, 09:33 PM   #19
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The style is great, and you put Herbie in it, i gotta see this when its done.
The four ain't nothing without Herbie!!!
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Thanks my friend! Let's do something soonish.
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Thank you, sir. I like it.
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and these pages are done. Just gotta letterer them! Woot!!

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Here is the dialogue sheet to our little masterpiece.

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Page 1 -

(Above title box) A Fantastic Tale of Marvelous Proportions Featuring HELLBOY With the FF in...

(Title box) IF THIS BE MY CIGAR

1 Reed - Once we check on this silent alarm. I promise we will get back to Captain America's birthday party.

2 Sue - I’m sure it’s nothing.

3 Johnny - Yeah, probably just Rock-for-Brains forgot the code - again.

(Credit box)
BiG Pants Presents a PB&J Production
PB DeBerry with J Simmons
Joie Simmons on (f)art
And the Grand poohbar eDuke lettering

Page 2 -

4 Herbie - One Million Nine Hundred and Ninety Six Thousand and Sixty Nine.

5 Herbie - It’s a shame we had to miss the party. The HULK just updated his Facegram profile with a very funny photo.

6 The Thing - Shut up and count.

7 The Thing - What’s with the light show?

Page 3

8 The Thing - What do they call you, Red?

9 Hellboy - HELLBOY.

10 The Thing - Give gruesome here a light.

11 Hellboy - Thanks Sparky.

12 Hellboy - Looks like that’s my exit.

13 The Thing - Yep.

(Skip a panel)

14 Mister Fantastic - Ben, who was that?

15 The Thing - I don’t know but, I like his style!

16 Fin
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Old 02-02-2018, 09:24 AM   #24
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"If this be my cigar" sounds better than "stogie".

And an exclamation mark at the last line ("I don't know, but like his style!") might emphasize it better.

Just IMO on both counts, though.
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