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Old 03-21-2019, 03:55 PM   #1
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Old 03-21-2019, 07:42 PM   #2
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Solid looking stuff. Techinally sound.
BUT it feels really sterile and lifeless.

Some more gesture and textures might add some extra 'life' to the pages.
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Page 1 panel 4 - girl's hands are way too large. It doesn't seem to be intentional because she has normal sized hands elsewhere.
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Perhaps "way too large" is a bit of an exageration. They look to be one little finger joint too long, though. If it were me, I'd make them about this size:

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Very neat. But as it was said, lifeless.
First and second panel can have some clouds, maybe a bunch of birds flying around, dust, flying papers etc..

Page 2 the ceiling line is touching their heads creating tangent also her finger in the big panel is tangent w the picture in the wall.

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Thanks everyone for your input. I’ve actually done professional work with Top Cow and hopefully Skyboibd soon. One of the editors really liked these but I appreciate everyone’s comments and input. I don’t do a lot of rendering and actually color most my own work and that’s where I start rendering everything.
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Can you show some of the coloured pages?
Curious about how much they change.
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