Bad Man's World Pages 1-5 Script Critique.

Silver Miles · 10-28-2012, 01:17 PM

I'm writing this crime story for a graphic novel. This is my second time writing a full script and need some opinions from fellow comic fans.

The script can be read here at http://comicdon.wordpress.com/2012/1...rld-pages-1-5/

Clockworm · 10-29-2012, 12:05 PM

Hi Silver,

I've gone over your script and made some notes, but I can't attach it to my forum post.

Do you have an email you could PM me so I can send it to you in a word file?

Cheers

lildre_cains · 10-31-2012, 02:28 PM

Hello Silver,

I read the 1st 3 pages of your script and I have got to say that this script is really interesting. One thing I would say, personally I do not list all of my camera angles in my comic book scripts as I find it detracts from the story a little but since this is more about informing the artist, that is ok. If you want, I can help edit the script, I have a portfolio of script-editing comics. My email is here andre1993farquha@yahoo.co.uk

Andre.

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Silver Miles Registered User Join Date: Oct 2012 Posts: 1	Bad Man's World Pages 1-5 Script Critique. I'm writing this crime story for a graphic novel. This is my second time writing a full script and need some opinions from fellow comic fans. The script can be read here at http://comicdon.wordpress.com/2012/1...rld-pages-1-5/

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10-29-2012, 12:05 PM	#2
Clockworm Liam Hayes Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: United Kingdom Posts: 48	Hi Silver, I've gone over your script and made some notes, but I can't attach it to my forum post. Do you have an email you could PM me so I can send it to you in a word file? Cheers

10-31-2012, 02:28 PM	#3
lildre_cains Registered User Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: London, South East Posts: 52	Hello Silver, I read the 1st 3 pages of your script and I have got to say that this script is really interesting. One thing I would say, personally I do not list all of my camera angles in my comic book scripts as I find it detracts from the story a little but since this is more about informing the artist, that is ok. If you want, I can help edit the script, I have a portfolio of script-editing comics. My email is here andre1993farquha@yahoo.co.uk Andre.