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FINAL: Crude Awakening Page 20 inked

Here's the finished page 20 of the book. I hope you all like the finished product as I added blacks where I saw fit and toned up the object lines as much as needed. Enjoy this piece, y'all!

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This page reads well to me, nice job. I like the lady zombie with the purse still attached to her, nice touch.
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This page reads well to me, nice job. I like the lady zombie with the purse still attached to her, nice touch.
Haha. I've added a bit of humor there. Thanks Rene A.
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Great page Dario!

A lot of work went into this and it shows.
Only small critique I can provide would be to ensure the wheels are correctly aligned and on the right axis. Otherwise it’ll flatten the image...

Keep it up !
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Great page Dario!

A lot of work went into this and it shows.
Only small critique I can provide would be to ensure the wheels are correctly aligned and on the right axis. Otherwise itíll flatten the image...

Keep it up !
Thanks Daniel! That front tire seems off a bit but it was turned to the left as realistically as I can. But yeah, it throws off that image. Thanks for the pointers.
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